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Naruto's Wake Up Tickle

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Naruto's Wake Up Tickle

This is a NaruHina tickling story where Hinata tickles Naruto's feet. Hope you like it :3

"N-Naruto-kun, it's, um, starting to get dark," Hinata stuttered nervously as she looked around her surroundings. "Do you think w-we should set up camp for the n-night?" It seemed that no matter how much she tried, she couldn't quite stop the embarrassing stammer that never failed to act up whenever she was around her crush.

The eighteen year-old blond male gazed up at the sky, noticing just how much the moon was illuminating. "Yeah, it is getting kinda late. We might as well call it a night. Which is good, 'cause I'm tired and hungry."

After finding a secluded part in the forest they were traveling through, Naruto quickly set up the tents they'd brought. Or, tried to at least. He managed to correctly set up one of them, but the other seemed in intent on not staying properly assembled. In the end, he got annoyed and left it off to the side as a useless pile of cloth and poles.

"Heh, sorry, Hinata. Looks like only one of them wants to work," he remarked sheepishly as he sat down beside her.

The indigo-haired girl, who had been cooking, turned a deep shade of red. "That's okay. I-it's not your fault that it isn't staying up," she murmured, her heart racing as he leaned in closer.

"Oh, you're making ramen! All right!" he cheered.

"W-well, I know it's your favorite..." Hinata stirred it, glancing at him shyly. "It probably won't be that good, since I didn't have a lot of ingredients."

"If it's ramen, you know I'll scarf it down no matter what," Naruto replied. "Besides, you cook better than everyone else I know, so I know for a fact that it'll be awesome."

Her blush turned even darker and she willed herself not to faint. "Thank you, N-Naruto-kun."

After polishing off three bowls of ramen, Naruto contently sat back against the tree. "Yeah, that was good. We should start going on missions together all the time, Hinata."

Shocked, the girl looked over at the Jinchuriki. "Really?"

"Yeah, no one else makes ramen while we're out on missions," he answered her.

"Oh." Feeling a bit dejected, Hinata began to clean up the area. She should've figured that ramen was the reason why.

With a yawn, Naruto slouched down a bit. "Man, I'm getting tired. What about you?"

Hinata shook her head. "Not really. You can head to bed, Naruto-kun. I-I'll take the first watch." It was routine for ninjas to take three-hour intervals of rotation during the night in order to look out for potential dangers while the others slept.

"Are you sure?" He straightened up, moving closer to her. "I don't mind staying up while you sleep." He was so close to her.

"No, it's okay," she squeaked out, her face bright red all over again.

Naruto chuckled, finding her blush to be cute. "Okay, if you insist." He rose to his feet and began to walk towards the tent, pausing a moment to look back at her. "I'm kind of a heavy sleeper, so if you can't wake me up when it's my turn, you can just smack me awake."

Hinata looked at him with utter shock. "S-smack you?"

"Well, that's how Sakura-chan wakes me, and it always works. But...maybe don't hit me as hard," he added with a sheepish smile. "Night, Hinata. Wake me in three hours, okay?"

"Goodnight, Naruto-kun," she replied with a smile.

After Naruto went into the tent to sleep for a few hours, Hinata waited outside to keep a look-out. The night was warm enough where a fire was not necessary, and she gazed up at the sky with a sigh. She wondered if Naruto would ever return her feelings, for he was just as oblivious as ever. Not wanting to think about it, she focused her attention on her surroundings to make sure nothing was amiss.

The three hours eventually passed, and it was time for Hinata to switch with Naruto so she could get some sleep herself. She anxiously approached the tent and opened up the flap. Naruto was sprawled on his stomach, his sleeping bag covering him only from the waist down. Hinata could see that he was still wearing his orange pants, but had stripped of his shirt. He hadn't bothered to remove the weapons pouch from the back of his belt. The male seemed to be in a deep sleep, as he was snoring and a bit of drool was leaking from his mouth.

Blushing feverishly, Hinata timidly called out to him. "Naruto-kun? Um, it's time for us to switch."

Naruto responded with more snores, briefly reaching his hand down the back of his pants to scratch his butt. After a moment of hesitation, Hinata went in and crouched down beside him and gently reached down to shake his shoulder.

"N-Naruto-kun?"

The blond muttered something in his sleep, then right back on to snoring. He hadn't been kidding about being a heavy sleeper.

"Maybe I should just let him sleep a little longer," she murmured, getting up. "I'll wake him in an hour..."

She was about to get out when Naruto muttered something in his sleep and rolled onto his back. His sleeping bag hadn't been properly zipped, and when he changed positions, it no longer covered his feet. Hinata stared at his bare soles for a moment, an idea forming in her head. She sat by his feet, barely paying attention to the snores he'd once again started emitting.

I wonder... She ran a single finger up the bottom of his foot to see if he reacted.

Naruto's toes twitched and he snorted, causing her to jerk her hand back as if she'd touched something hot.

"Naruto-kun?" The girl waited a moment to see if he'd woken up, only to discover that he was still asleep. "Maybe if I..." Her voice trailed off and she reached down to lightly brush her fingers against the sole of his right foot.

The Jinchuriki chuckled softly, attempting to move his foot away. However, Hinata took hold of his ankle to keep it in place and continued tickling him. Her fingers spidered up and down the entire bottom of his foot, causing him to laugh and slowly awaken. She went up from his heel, her nails lightly scribbling against along his arch, over the ball of his foot, and up to the base of his toes.

"Hehehehehehehehehe," Naruto laughed, his toes curling and uncurling as those lithe fingers assaulted his sensitive sole. "Thahahahahat tihihihickles!"

Hinata paused for a moment. "S-Sorry, Naruto-kun, but you weren't waking up."

"Oh, okay...I'll be right up," Naruto relaxed again, and before Hinata knew it, he was snoring.

"Naruto-kun?" The indigo-haired girl frowned a bit, realizing that he'd fallen back to sleep all over again. Guess there was no way around it this time. If tickling him was the only way to wake him, then so be it.

Hinata wrapped her arm around both of his ankles to keep them in place and began to mercilessly tickle both of his feet with her teasing, feathery touches. All at once, Naruto broke into laughter, trying and failing to move his legs away.

"Hahahahahahahahahahaha! Hinatahahahahahahaha! Stohohohop! It hahahahahahaha tickles!" He laughed, unable to break free from her hold.

"I'm sorry, but this is the only way to wake you," she apologetically explained as she kept up with the tickling. "Or keep you a-awake, I should say."

The blond squirmed and laughed while she continued to assault him. Her fingers were so soft and delicate, and they were small enough to easily wiggle under and in between his toes.

"Ahahahahahahahahahaha! Okahahahahahahay! I'm hahahahahahaha awahahahake!" Naruto sputtered out.

"Are you?" Hinata asked him. As if to prove a point, she tickled him a bit harder, making sure not to pass by even a single spot on his helpless soles. She concentrated on his arches for a few seconds, causing him to laugh so hard that he couldn't even speak. "I didn't even know you were this ticklish, Naruto-kun."

He hadn't known either. Well, not to this degree at least. Sure, certain parts of his body had always been sensitive, but he never imagined that a few soft touches to his feet would send him into hysterics. However, he couldn't help but enjoy just how soft and smooth her fingers were, even if it did tickle.

"Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Stohohohop! P-Plehehehehease!" Naruto begged through his laughter.

"If I stop, will you stay awake, Naruto-kun?" she asked, her pretty lavender eyes gazing into his blue ones. Her index finger tickled the base of his toes, which made him to arch his back while he laughed.

"Yehehehehehes!" He barely managed.

"Alright," Hinata replied, ceasing the torture.

Naruto continued to giggle for a few seconds as he collapsed onto his back, trying to catch his breath. A bit of perspiration glistened on his bare, muscular chest, causing Hinata to blush profusely. She looked away, but kept her hold on his ankles just in case. After Naruto had taken in enough oxygen, he closed his eyes once more.

"N-Naruto-kun?" Hinata spoke up meekly. To her astonishment, she received a series of snores as a response, indicating that Naruto had, once again, passed out. That was the last straw. This would keep him awake for sure. She leaned down so that her face was close to his feet and she slowly began to run her tongue up and down the sole of his left foot. Her fingers tickled his right one, and within a matter of seconds, Naruto was laughing all over again.

"NOHOHOHOHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Naruto threw his head back, his ankles still locked in her hold. Her tongue was sending him into a ticklish frenzy, lapping away at his sanity. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

Hinata didn't let up this time, making sure that this would keep him awake for good. She darted her tongue in between and under his wiggling toes, allowing her fingers to glide over his slick sole. Her fingers skittered along his instep before moving to the arch, going back and forth between spots every few seconds.

"HINAHAHAHAHAHAHAHATAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEHEHEHEHEHEASE! STOHAHAHAHAHAP!"' Naruto pleaded, now wide awake.

Hinata kept up with the torment, however, not showing any signs of letting up. She licked, sucked and nibbled on his toes with vigor, vaguely aware that Naruto had managed to sit up.

"NOHOHOHAHAHAHAHA! NOT MY TOHOHOHOHOES! I'M SOHOHAHAHAHAHORY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Even sitting up, Naruto couldn't find the strength to jerk his legs away, as the ticklish sensations seemed to paralyze him. "PLEHEHEHEHEASE HINATAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! DOHOHOHON'T! STOHOHAHAHAHAP!"

The girl paused for a brief moment, looking up at him cutely. "Don't stop? Okay, Naruto-kun." With that, she resumed the tickling, this time licking his soles while using her fingertips to tease his toes. Her fingers wiggled in between each digit, and her tongue glided easily over his arches.

Naruto thought he was going to lose his mind, and he weakly tried to pull away. He couldn't deny that Hinata's touches felt rather nice, and he even let out a moan when she engulfed three of his toes into her mouth at once. However, it tickled immensely as soon as she started to suck on those toes.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHA! OKAHAHAHAY! I'M UHAHAHAHAHUP!" Naruto barely managed to sputter out through uncontrollable laughter.

Hinata stopped what she was doing, letting go of her crush's restrained ankles. She looked at him guiltily as Naruto panted to catch his breath, feeling as though she'd gone overboard.

"I-I'm sorry, N-Naruto-kun," she murmured apologetically. "I shouldn't have done that."

To her surprise, Naruto didn't seem angry or even upset. He chuckled softly, sheepishly rubbing the back of his head. "Well, it's not your fault that I'm a pain to wake up. You're lucky that my feet are really ticklish."

"So y-you're not mad?" She worriedly asked, lowering her gaze with shame.

"Nah, it's fine," he replied with a laugh. Noticing that she still looked saddened, he gently cupped her face in his hands to make her look up at him. "I'm not mad, okay?"

A light blush dusted her cheeks as she gazed at him with her lavender eyes, unable to speak or even move. Naruto swallowed, taking in her soft, angelic features. Hinata looked so adorable with that blush, and he was unable to keep himself from leaning closer to her. His lips made contact with hers ever-so-lightly, his hands still cupping her face. Hinata gasped softly in surprise from this kiss, and when they parted a few seconds later, her face had turned even redder.
Naruto-kun just kissed me, she thought to herself with utter shock. He kissed me... She fainted seconds later.

Naruto caught her in his arms and carefully laid her down, covering her with his sleeping bag. No sense in trying to wake her if it was her turn to sleep anyway. He brushed some hair out of her face, hesitating for a brief second before leaning down to plant another kiss on her lips.

"Goodnight, Hinata," he whispered in her ear. Sitting up, the blond pulled his sandals on, his feet still slick from Hinata's saliva. His toes curled just at the memory of her tongue lapping under and in between them. He'd never expected her to wake him up in such a way, but it turned out to be extremely effective in the end. And he couldn't really say that he hated it. 'Well', he thought to himself with a smirk as he left the tent for his three-hour watch, 'now she knows exactly how to wake me up from now on. It's way better than getting smacked, that's for sure.'

Well, that was fun to write ^_^ Yes, I love NaruHina and now that they're officially canon I can die happy. All I need to do now is wait for someone to bootleg the new Naruto movie and add English subtitles so that my life will be complete. Anyway, I'll be writing another NaruHina tickle story, though that one will be much more explicit and target several areas on Naruto's body, including some naughty ones ;)
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